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Comment on Silent Fog by Akanksha Rajput

Akanksha Rajput — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 20:27:20 +0000

… I feel in my womb/ A Soul lost to another world/ Another waiting to be brought… [...] The chants mesmerized the compatriots… [...]
These lines make one realise – yet another time – why literature is so magical, like other art forms. And why reasons and intellectualism fall too short in living a life completely… The author creates magic, and undergoes all underdog feelings, frustrations, even suicide, after all, the thought of death sets in motion all desire of life, and then he creates, with one dimension, and adds the ghosts of other two dimesions… and when the reader reads them, he not only weeps for the souls that have been lost to an another world, but also cries for the loss of his own. The death of a soul is a very, very slow process. Just about like everything else. Beautiful, almost painful creation… promises that the heart from where this came from, is alive, always been and almost asserts all my hope that it always will.

Comment on LIE by Akanksha Rajput

Akanksha Rajput — Sat, 13 Sep 2008 15:58:53 +0000

This is one of the most honest pieces I have read in a long time. The concept and the conquest of one’s Identity is truly one of the greatest quests of any thinking creature. And you seem to be lost in that maze. Welcome to the madness. Hope you will stay here for long. The only exits here are – Suicide and Compromise. “Head in heaven and fingers in hire…” Welcome, Sameer.

Comment on Scars on my soul by pfffrttttttt

pfffrttttttt — Wed, 27 Aug 2008 23:07:21 +0000

Dude,what shit is this?Where did you learn this,is this what they taught you in osmania??????

Comment on Deviation by Akanksha Rajput

Akanksha Rajput — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 13:49:19 +0000

A stupid post.

Comment on Deviation by kruthika rao

kruthika rao — Sun, 27 Jul 2008 07:19:56 +0000

hey!!
beautifully written!!!

Comment on Scars on my soul by karthik

karthik — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 08:40:27 +0000

inappropriate

Comment on Scars on my soul by karthik

karthik — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 08:39:26 +0000

Hmm…wonder what got you going about all this..its all incredibly flowery but i really cant grasp the essence..and like someones pointed out..the vocabulary usage is a little misappropriate..and even grammar..like just the first sentence for example! But some solid stoner stuff this

Comment on Scars on my soul by kaustubh

kaustubh — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 06:22:59 +0000

er…i appreciate the fact that you like to express your thoughts but english obviously isnt the right mode to do so.

It seems like you have recently prepared hurriedly for some vocabulary test? There are big words all over the place but over 80% of them are misused. Not to mention the erroneous grammatical construction.

However I like people like you that enjoy writing about random daily experiences. Practice written english often, it will help improve sentence structure and cogency.

Comment on Scars on my soul by Dosia McKay

Dosia McKay — Thu, 29 May 2008 20:14:17 +0000

Hello Travelsam. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments. I see you have 3 blogs – I suppose sometimes it takes several venues to expres oneself. I have only 2 . Keep writing and being creative!

Comment on Femme Fatale by sweety

sweety — Sat, 23 Feb 2008 04:35:00 +0000

that was really nice !!

i never knew we r from the same college !! which branch r u from??

im from eee